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Learning, turning, burning,
of the fingers.
Glaring, staring, straining,
of the retina.
Oh how the mind swells,
and the thoughts dwell.
The skin on your finger tips rot,
as the paper slowly stacks.
Never focused to a single thought,
lke a deer scared in its tracks.
The mammoth stands before you,
to read me it implores you.
Starting at one and on to infinity,
creating a mindset of confused trinity.
Of wanting to stop, turn, and blink,
but what you really are at is your mind's brink.
Like a loudening crescendo,
it builds in your thoughts.
Mind becoming playdough,
as the damn thing rots.
Still ever the pages pile higher,
while the thoughts burn like fire.
All the time you think,
why did I take too many a class.
While blood from your nose drips in the sink,
and you could kick your self in your stupid ass.
Then like the final thought of a bug on car glass,
your head bursts with ideas, but that one's your last.
©2006-2009 ~chhill
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you really are driving yourself nuts with all your reading you have to do arent you? poor thing

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Don't waste your time on me. Your already the voice inside my head.
Eh, someone's got to be the next literary mind.

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Remember, to forget is a blessing, but to forgive is divine.

Chuck
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I love this. It's just...wow, it personifies COMPLETELY how I feel about school right now. Oh, wow. :+fav: I just have to...wow, absolutely amazing.

Speaking of nosebleeds (briefly, anyway, lol) Have you ever been so dizzy and so mind-boggled that it feels like your nose is bleeding even when it's really not? I don't know. I got that feeling yesterday and it was really weird.

Yeah, random, I know. Just wanted to see if I was all alone on that feeling. Heh

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Last night I watched you sleeping. Once more the nightmare came. I heard you cry out something, a word that sounded like a name. And it hurts me more than I can bare. Knowing part of you I'll never share...never know...
But still. I still believe...
Actually I had a burning sensation in my nose a lot this last week, but suprisingly there wasn't any blood coming out. I did have
one nose bleed at the very end of all of the reading though.

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Live life, have fun, and no regrets.
Remember, to forget is a blessing, but to forgive is divine.

Chuck
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And here is the game my crew & I are making: [link]
I get that burning feeling a lot after I've been working/reading for too long. I wish there actually would be some blood next time though. The lack of blood is just...eerie...:O...but yeah. Glad I'm not alone on this, heh:-).

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Last night I watched you sleeping. Once more the nightmare came. I heard you cry out something, a word that sounded like a name. And it hurts me more than I can bare. Knowing part of you I'll never share...never know...
But still. I still believe...
Yep we're never alone.

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Live life, have fun, and no regrets.
Remember, to forget is a blessing, but to forgive is divine.

Chuck
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And here is the game my crew & I are making: [link]
True, true. Even when we think we are, we're not. (Love the uplifting comments, by the way :D! They really brighten me)

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Last night I watched you sleeping. Once more the nightmare came. I heard you cry out something, a word that sounded like a name. And it hurts me more than I can bare. Knowing part of you I'll never share...never know...
But still. I still believe...
Yep

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Live life, have fun, and no regrets.
Remember, to forget is a blessing, but to forgive is divine.

Chuck
Heres my gallery! [link]
And here is the game my crew & I are making: [link]

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